ART: Face Off (WiP)

Here is another WiP I've been working on this week.

You'll recognize the scene from canon but it has been adapted to fit my "My Best Friend - the Werewolf"-verse I'm writing where Danny is the one that gets bitten, Jackson is the one stuck dealing with Derek and Stiles is skulking around trying to figure out what is going on in Beacon Hills.

As an FYI I'm looking for someone that can give a quick look through the first chapter of "My Best Friend - the Werewolf". For grammar and sentence structure basically.